Similes and Metaphors (-:

Luis:
Luis' hair is dark like something really dark
Luis is as cool as a penguin
Luis is shiny like a rock

Luis :
Luis' hair is as soft as a KITTY!
Luis is as blond as a polar bear
Luis is dumb like a turtle

My kitty<3

My cat waffles i the best cat eveerr. Hes the kitty that ate the ice cream. My cat is really cute and he eats bugs! :D if you tell him to follow you he comes and he goes for walks(somethimes) he eats anything and likes to lay in the dirt.....i love my kitty :):)

epic :)

An Epic is a really long poem that describes a hero and his/her achievements. It 's something heroic and is a big deal.

Some examples that I considered epic was( lines 53-56) when Apollo listens to his priest Cyryses prayers and takes actions & attacks the camp. I thought it showed he was helping Chryses,
and another example was when Achilles stands up and talks back to Agamemnon, because no one else would stand up to him. (lines 159-181!)
My last example is on lines 335-338...when Agamemnon says that hes going to take Achilles girl, but(lines 366)Achilles prays to his mother Thetis and ask for help,I think that it was good to ask for help instead of thinking that he can do everything himself.

My Hero: animal activists

My Heros are animal activists because they think its wrong to kill animals,and hurt them. They say that animals need rights too,and they want to help them. Alot of people are animal activists so i couldn't just choose one.
Animal activists speak for the animals cause animals can't speak! (its true) they know how the animal feels.

alot of people don't care about animals,they say that animals are made for food! Thats really stupid cause we don't need meat to survive,and alot of farms beat animals really bad! Those people are really stupid. I think that what the animal activists are doing is good,because animals have to be treated good and they shouldn't be killed.